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[Art of Revenge]

It's not terrible but...

This still could use a lot of work. Just some tips:

- it's always a good idea to credit the audio, otherwise you're plagiarizing someone else's work and that's NO GOOD.

- this is a common rule of thumb: NEVER submit a first attempt at flash unless it is phenomenally good.

- this really doesn't look like it was made in flash at all. The animation's too grainy and looks imported or whatnot.

Anyways, I leave improvements up to you, I think you have a better idea than anyone else on what you need to work on.

Tongphei responds:

from next time, I will use my own sound clip. this short movie was animated in the year 2002 and uploaded on youtube. when I came to know about this great website NG, I was interested to share my work round the globe. So, I downloaded this from my youtube account http://www.youtube.com/user/nishikant a and made some changes using Windows movie maker.
I will try my best level in the upcoming movie, "The Taste of Blood".
Thanks for your suggestion and reviews.

[The Red Dot And The Clock]

Sublime frame-by-frame!

The colors were so pretty and the lines squiggled so nicely. I wish there was a replay button though, then I could enjoy the bright, colorful, squiggly lines more conveniently :P

Happy Clock Day!!! :3

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Or you could reload the page. ;)

[B, Remade!]

Nostalgic.

The colors remind me of the lights on the Christmas Tree... prettyyyyyyy...

Those who are truly brilliant know how to combine two great things to make an amazing piece of art in an ingenious and innovative way.

Chime responds:

THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME.

[S13 - I Want It! Syndrome]

That was amazing!

That's the best 10 minutes I've spent so far lol. I loved the art work and the animation quality. Funny as hell too!

Nightwayfarer responds:

thanx :B
i'm still improving myself

[Blaze vs Shadow]

Pretty good flash so far...

The animation was fluid and the choreography was decent too. I'd suggest you pay more attention to the background; it's rather simplistic and unstimulating. The text is also way too small, I'm having trouble reading what they're saying.

Hopefully the finished product will be even more impressive.

XiaoxiaoGOD responds:

thanks for the positive support :3 im sorry its unfinished :P ill tyr my best to finish it

[Love Music Video]

Average animation

It wasn't terrible but nothing too special either. I, too, enjoyed the McDonalds joke hehe.

LeonBlade responds:

Thanks, I had to do the over 9000 joke haha.

[Sonic and Shadow Caramell]

Not much to say

If you enlarged the window and added a background it would've been better; I don't see much creativity here. At least you added the whole song.

Payne-Serge responds:

well, i'll try that next time, i'm still kinda new to flash anywaus

[A man called paul]

It was nice n simple.I enjoyed it.

The style kinda reminds me of Angela Anaconda, if anyone can remember that show. The only suggestion I'd make is that you improve on the art. The background and bodies seemed crudely drawn but it wasn't too bad. Keep at it!

kojay responds:

what can i say it was a rush job

[Trapped 1]

It was okay.

Nothing really too special about this; it was neither good nor terrible. However it would've been to your advantage to at least come up with some sort of ending. At least have him open a door and say "what the hell?" rather than abruptly end within 2 seconds of a scene transition. Try to avoid doing that from now on.

GuerrilleroHeroico responds:

The movie was originally supposed to be much longer, but the idea kind of faded away. I wasn't to happy with it and just wanted to nail on a quick ending and start making something better.