Meh, didn't appeal to me...
Here's some advice (even though I don't own flash, I've used it):
1. Increase Frames Per Second to make animation smoother.
2. Make movie longer, work even harder.
3. Think outside the box! Make the movie colorful and imaginative!
4. Replay button.
Follow those and you'll have a great FBS flash! Your effort, however is to be admired so keep it up!